The things to fix are our storyboard and script. We did this in the same class after we were rejected. We added an extra 6 shots to our storyboard and added 3 lines to our script. This would reduce the times of the other shots, which was the main concern, as our shots were around 10 seconds each. The script was also revised for the existing scenes, to make it more smooth to read and act with.
Doing it in class was definitely a bonus. It allowed us to work more efficiently, and voice our ideas while giving criticisms and we had access to the document at the same time. When finished, I had taken a picture of the documents with my phone and sent it to my teammate through Outlook, allowing him to copy and paste the improved documents straight into the new portfolio.
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